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« on: September 20, 2009, 03:03:31 AM »

Hate To Love


Let her go,
Just watch her fall,
Don't extend a hand,
Just watch darkness swallow her,
Into the abyss she falls,


Throw her in the fire,
Can you see her burn?
Stare at her photo,
Watch it consume her,
Now she'll fade away,


Release the arrow,
The target her heart,
Watch her break,
Splintering into a thousand pieces,
Will she perish yet again?


Reach for the sword,
Plunge it in deep,
Watch the scarlet tears fall,
Drip drip?
See what you've done,
All this is caused by love
 
 
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Life is a gamble.
it's harsh and painful most of the time, and it's not for the timid.
spoils go to the victor, not for the one that doesn't even show up for the battle.
~Acheron Parthenopaeus~
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« Reply #1 on: September 20, 2009, 03:15:42 AM »

love it.  very dark witted and passionate about desires left abandend.  i enjoyed this becayse it shows us a glimpse into your thoughts dear jess.

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« Reply #2 on: November 05, 2009, 06:08:28 AM »

I really love this poem, It's a little dark but it really displays a mystical feeling within this poem.  Great form and imagery.  Excellent piece. Dance & Sing
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