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« on: May 15, 2010, 04:21:32 PM »

EFHARISTO
You make me live
I wanna say
Efharisto

I wanna write you a song,
So you'll understand
All that you see in my
Eyes and read in my hand
Is what I honestly feel
This time I know that it's for real
And 'til I find the right way
This is what I wanna say

Efharisto
For all the love you give
And the way you make me live
I'll say the only word, I know
Efharisto
I thank the stars above
For this everlasting love
I wanna say
Efharisto

You are to me like the sun
So warm in the sky
You are like sweet summer rain
As soft as a sigh

You're like the ocean so deep
Rocking me gently in my sleep
Don't know where I'm gonna start
So I just say it from the heart

Efharisto
For all the love you give
And the way you make me live
I'll say the only word, I know
Efharisto
I thank the stars above
For this everlasting love
I say it from my heart
For your love

Efharisto
For all the love you give
And the way you make me live
I'll say the only word, I know
Efharisto
I thank the stars above
For this everlasting love
I wanna say Efharisto

Efharisto
Efharisto

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« Reply #1 on: May 17, 2010, 01:51:40 AM »

Hi Bella Donna.  hat wave
'Efharisto' Greek for: 'Thank you'  
  A nice title and tribute to the language plus a great word to remember even if it is the only one you know.
Your choice of words express strongly the passion for another which is allways a good start when writing to capture a certain body of the listening public, especially those who have been to the Greek Islands and have found love during there stay.
Like all Lyrics they have a ring and connection with the author but need music to bring them alive and give them feeling for the listener. Reading through the stanzas a couple of times you soon begin to try and slot in a tune from the mind and your using 'Efharisto' as the link can stick slightly when read but like some of the great songs from the past can also stick in the mind?    

Thank you for sharing.   Positive Karma From me.

Best regards

Paul

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